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Strong use of the metaphor “a caged bird” to convey isolation. To push into Level 4, weave in the writer’s methods , consider how sibilance in “silent, still shadows” builds tension.
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The writer uses a simile when he says the fog was “like a curtain.” This shows that the fog is thick and you can’t see through it. It makes the reader feel like something bad is going to happen. The word “curtain” makes it feel closed in.
Dickens’ simile “like a curtain” transforms the fog into a theatrical veil, deliberately concealing London’s moral decay from view. The domestic connotations of “curtain” juxtapose the suffocating atmosphere outside, foreshadowing Scrooge’s own emotional isolation , a barrier drawn between him and society.
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Names the simile and analyses its dual connotations rather than just labelling the device.
Layered inference
Reads the fog as symbolic of moral concealment, moving beyond a literal description.
Writer's intent
Links the imagery to Dickens' wider critique and Scrooge's character arc.
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